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As mentioned yesterday, I have been revisiting a few shows where some of the characters are brooding types.  I’ve always been drawn to them – I suppose we all are or there wouldn’t be so many of those characters written 😉

I looked upspuriousandrusticjust to see if I could get a different angle on the words by doing so.


View  Long  Nippy  Wonder  Spurious  Action  Milk  Screw  Rustic


I just needed somewhere with a view –

To draw a long breath and centre;

Feel the nippy wind stealing troubles,

Wonder at something much bigger than me.


How long I have played the spurious child:

Frozen, scared of action in case

Worms and milk everywhere

Would make others cry?


Turning that screw on myself

Just to punish thoughts of grandeur;

Keep myself rustic and humble

For some unrealised gain.


While thinking about the poem, Dr. Carter from ER sprang into my head. I think it’s because of the scenes where he goes out to get some air and agonise over life, the universe, and everything?! If I wasn’t so squeamish I would get a hold of all the seasons of that corker, too…





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2 Responses to “Wonder”

  1. Jennifer Patino Says:

    Dr. Carter was my favorite! Love your poem. 🙂

  2. Montaffera Says:

    😊 Thank you! x

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