Hey there 🙂
Well!
I felt like this Jimpix selection took a little more ‘cobbling’ than usual to give me a poem!! Maybe I should just present you with what I came up with and see what you make of it, before I colour your view by telling you how I did it…?
Evaporate Blaze Erosion Galloway Competing Menorah Cheshire Draconian Beel
As I felt the will to create
Evaporate,
I took a packed train
To blaze a trail
Through the erosion of my wits.
I stuck with Galloway:
Kept breathing through the voices
Competing for dominance
In every carriage –
Channelled the menorah within:
My attention branching,
All wicks getting low…
But the golden buds were forming
Even as I read.
I’ll shine
From the highest point in Cheshire
After traversing rough terrain
In Draconian weather.
I will then face the heat,
Stir up some beel –
From still waters
Cultivate a crop worth harvesting.
So…thoughts?!
Well, here are mine:
One of my favourite authors is Janice Galloway, so when I saw her surname come up, I knew she had to feature somewhere! Her best-known novel (see picture) is also one that I focussed on in my university dissertation, so I refer to that in the poem, too 😉
The origins of ‘menorah’ are described in a Wikipedia entry, and it goes into detail about how Moses was instructed to fashion the first one; so I borrowed some of that imagery.
Moses was told about this lamp construction while on a mountain. The highest peak in Cheshire is called Shining Tor, which went well with the light theme 😉
The above link says there is ‘mixed terrain’ on the mountain walk, so I modified this and threw in some bad weather to use ‘draconian’…
I read about where a ‘beel’ could be found, thought about the climate and how it could fit into my theme, then made use of the information I had gleaned about rice-growing in Bangladesh.
Hopefully, all these images meld together ok, to leave you with a poem about: feeling creatively drained by my situation; travelling to Cheshire (the ‘train’ representing both my thoughts and the actual mode of transportation); finding inspiration in Galloway’s words and feeling that sprout into other creative thoughts; then wrestling with my depressive tendencies and writers’ block etc, to finally come out on top, face new challenges, and present the world with fresh work and renewed faith in my writing… 😛
Phew!
Three days to go until the next Jimpix workout 😉
P.S – am I the only one who has ‘Walking in Memphis’ (Cher’s version) stuck in her head since reading ‘beel’?!
P.P.S – I love that the link for ‘draconian’ also has an option to explore other words that had their first known use in the same year! (‘Buckshot’ and ‘Clotheshorse’ are two, if you’re interested)
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August 7th, 2017 at 8:59 pm
That is a very, very interesting poem, giving lots of food for thought. Well done.
August 7th, 2017 at 9:22 pm
Thank you Jane 😃 tested my noggin a bit!