Scary Visions – Final Edit
Childhood, Facebook Collaborations, Longer Shorts, Mental Health, Parenting, Relationships, Scary Visions Add commentsOr, to name this post more accurately, ‘the edit as it will stand until I get the courage to scrap most of what I’ve written and do the show, not tell version…!!’
I have a bit of a story arc, a start and a conclusion, a nod towards what the prompt was. I have different characters and a background to most of them properly worked out. But…
Anyway, I’ll let you read it and see what you think. I know what needs changed and why I don’t like it, and that’s the main thing. There are still over 2,500 words that have been put down within a week on the same topic. This is awesome practice and a learning experience…and that is why I’m here. 😉
Thanks very much for the prompt, Sandy!!
The link below should take you to the PDF. See you tomorrow for the beginning of a new story!
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December 4th, 2017 at 5:31 am
Great story. I have no experience in being a new mother but I was able to get a feel through your story. I love the “visions” parts. The ending was pretty perfect to me too. 🙂
December 4th, 2017 at 11:38 am
Awww what a lovely review, thank you xxx