Hey 🙂
For day six I was prompted to push my comfort zone in regards to where I break the lines in my poem. Much easier task than yesterday!!
I wrote two poems as a matter of fact, but I liked this one best:
RULE OF THUMB
There was a smudge on the long lens;
the accident
looks hazy now
but it’s sharp technicolour in my head.
Running on a loop: silent and slowed down and ever so devastating.
Every time.
Not
frozen:
a fog
obscuring
our
view.
In reality:
his eyelids bore my living whorls.
But…
here we have
the fingerprint of history.
[Pic is from here]
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