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“…Today, I’d like to challenge you to blend…concepts into your own work, by producing a poem that meditates, from a position of tranquility, on an emotion you have felt powerfully. You might try including a dramatic, declarative statement, like Hass’s “All the new thinking is about loss,” or O’Hara’s “It is easy to be beautiful; it is difficult to appear so.” Or, like, Baudelaire, you might try addressing your feeling directly, as if it were a person you could talk to. There are as many approaches to this as there are poets, and poems.” [from the NaPoWriMo site]
Well, I don’t know about you, but if I ‘meditate’ on an issue I’m having, my inner wisdom has a way of never pulling her punch. I get it squarely between the eyes and have to stop flinching and actually accept the lesson before I can move on. I get a lot of these home truths dealt to me while doing mundane things like washing our dishes, folding laundry or just wandering back from the school run looking at the sky…
Something I read (or someone said) might stay with me, and my inner wisdom will shrug and tell me that I might not like it, but if I look across the patterns of my day-to-day there is this piece of evidence, this silly sabotaging habit, this phrase I use that proves that person/book was at least half relevant to something I’m wrestling with. There is usually a very annoying list of achievable steps that gets presented to me as well, or a YouTube video pops up that is ridiculously well timed…don’t you just hate that?!
This poem came out of our need to start tweaking things around the house now that the kids are getting more independent and the fixtures and fittings are not holding up as well as they used to, etc etc…
If it gets too good they’ll change it,
Better not get comfy here;
Then your confidence won’t be hit
When ‘they’ turn – and you can’t steer.
So: these walls did not get painted
And this carpet’s still the same
As the day the previous owners
Picked it out – yes I’m to blame;
And there’s still unopened boxes
Lurking in our storage piles
That I have no heart to ditch yet
So keep lugging o’er the miles.
I think I’m waiting for some signal
That I can trust what is good
Not to vanish like a mirage
If I drop my guard. Then: stood
In the glow of my achievements
(And the knowledge I now hold)
I’ll stop running scripts from childhood
And refusing to be bold…
So that’s my little pep talk with myself over for another day 😉
That’s the penultimate poem of NaPoWriMo dusted, too! Whoa!
Catch you tomorrow…
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