Hello!
I liked where the words were pointing today, but did not have a CLUE how to make ‘giver’ fit.
From Textfixer
Would I have the airship being gifted to the main character by someone…?
I stared out of Eldest’s window (into the wild weather we are experiencing, thanks to Ophelia) for a bit, and then hit upon the idea that maybe ‘giver’ could become ‘Guh-eye-ver’. My character had a name, and the poem was written in about 7 minutes!
Giver Airship Demon Ugly Abnormally Grenade Barbershop Heartless Glumly
Giver steered his airship
Towards the demon’s maw;
An ugly tooth gleamed
From the abnormally large gums.
Giver threw the grenade
And watched it disappear,
Bouncing twice upon the giant tongue
For good measure.
It had been a sound decision
To visit that barbershop.
Intel had been spot on:
The owner had, indeed,
Stockpiled many a useful weapon.
Still, Giver felt a little heartless
In the nanosecond the creature knew
It was about to expire.
Our hero met the cheering crowd
A trifle glumly, but unharmed.
I battled my own demon today, but lost bitterly. Damn you, crazy technology *shakes fist* 😉
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