A Potent Potion (#NaPoWriMo Day 4)

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Good Afternoon 🙂

 

Today’s prompt was to use concrete nouns in a poem to convey an idea or feeling, instead of using more abstract ones.

I read the below to a friend and it they deemed it very obscure – albeit poetic – and said not many of my readers would understand it 🙁

What do you think this poem is talking about?

Please let me know in the comments…

 

A POTENT POTION

I measure out the feathers

(Sub the black for gold instead)

Throw in handfuls of rose petals

A dirty, dusty bed;

 

A leaky, twisted faucet

Joins the pile (with some songs)

My outlook becomes darker –

And this recipe is done.

 

[Pic is from here]

 

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2 Responses to “A Potent Potion (#NaPoWriMo Day 4)”

  1. Jennifer Patino Says:

    Hmm…I read it as expressing desire for a break from household chores. But, I really have no idea. 🙃

  2. Montaffera Says:

    I probably should change my sheets more often… x

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